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  • Writing Tips Re: Character obsession

    I have problem defining what I'm talking about too. I'm sure "obsession" is not really the most correct word for it. Hmm, but in general, it's what interests a character. ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Character obsession

    Well, I need some ideas on obsessions characters would have. I tried to find this, indexed, in tvtropes but I couldn't find it (if someone know where to find it, ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Any tips on starting a 1st POV?

    Yeah, I'll just write. But sooner or later I'll come back to the beginning and be stressed out all over again. Here's what I'm thinking of right now: an opening ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Any tips on starting a 1st POV?

    And I wouldn't worry about putting in a why they're acting. That can be the main plot of the novel, and you don't want to give away the conflict right ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Any tips on starting a 1st POV?

    Thanks for the answers! So if I'm getting it correctly, having the MC introduce himself at the start is a big no-no, yes? All I'm left is whether to start ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Any tips on starting a 1st POV?

    Can it start with the MC introducing himself? If yes, how long of a description would be good? Can it start with his thoughts? If so, how do I connect ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Need help on my beginning !

    'Leaving the reason as to why human is a problem', I got that suggestion a lot. I know it can work out, but why I still see it as a ...

    Nov 10, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Need help on my beginning !

    @Apple Well I have a suggestion. You could begin with the angel saying that humans are the problem with the war and such (but only briefly) and then jump into ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Need help on my beginning !

    Thank you! That's what I want to do. It's just, my worry comes from when I explain the situation so lightly (that human is a problem), worrying the reader won't ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Need help on my beginning !

    So, it's in first person. I have the hook in the beginning. I start it really close to the 'turning point'. In fact, it starts with the turning point. My ...

    Nov 8, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Need advice, worldbuilding

    Hey, the animal doesn't have to be big! Think about sea/river transport, maybe a net with an artificial bait for fishes, that could accelerate a ship. This would work nicely, ...

    Jun 5, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Need advice, worldbuilding

    technology is generally how it is because that's been found to be the best way to do things That's exactly what I was thinking. When it comes to cars, there's ...

    Jun 4, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: How to avoid info dump in fantasy world

    Hi, I'm currently working on this fantasy story, and is having trouble describing some things without giving too much info in a single chapter. The 'world' I'm trying to describe ...

    Jun 4, 2009


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